[[이름]_essay]Do you think that young adults having or owning a car is a luxury or a necessity?

In my opinion, young adults under 30's having a car is luxury. Actually, If we are not salesman with so many business trip, 20's young people are not need a car. Of course own car is really convenient transpotation. However, That is required a lot of money for oil and maintenance. 20's young people have to deposit to their wedding and baby and family. Therefore, If we not need a car surely,we can hold the desire.

Hi [이름]!^^ Great answers!^^ People must prioritize the things that they spend money on and that includes cars. I think using public transportation is easy and the cheapest too!^^ What do you think? T.Debby^^ This are my corrections for you today: In my opinion, young adults under 30\'s having a car is luxury. >> CORRECT OR> I will say that it is a luxury if people under their 30\'s have a car.Actually, If we are not salesman with so many business trip, 20\'s young people are not need a car. >> Actually, If we are not salesmen with so many business trips,  young people on their 20\'s don\'t need a car. Of course own car is really convenient transpotation. >> Of course owning a car is really convenient for transportation.However, That is required a lot of money for oil and maintenance. >> However, that requires a lot of money for oil and maintenance.20\'s young people have to deposit to their wedding and baby and family. >> Young people in their 20\'s have to save for their wedding and baby and family.Therefore, If we not need a car surely,we can hold the desire. >> Therefore, If we do not need a car surely, we can hold the desire.