[[이름] essay]Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes, my younger brother come back to home with his friends unexpectedly.
It's a little bewildered to our family.
However, we often order a fried chicken delivery.
Delivery of chicken or boiled pork and so on is general in Korea.
We can relax with talking by having a some food with together.
We become intimate with his friends.
So, his friends like to come to our home.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. My older brother would often do this too when I was in highschool. He would often invite his friends over after a game of basketball and they would make a big mess in the house. Haha! I guess your brother\'s friends are more behaved and well-mannered. Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Sometimes, my younger brother come back to home with his friends unexpectedly.>> Sometimes my younger brother would come back home with his friends unexpectedly.It\'s a little bewildered to our family.
>> Our family would get a little rattled because of that.
OR >> Our family would get a little flustered because of that.However, we often order a fried chicken delivery.>> However, we would often order fried chicken for delivery.
OR >> However, we would often have fried chicken delivered to our house.Delivery of chicken or boiled pork and so on is general in Korea.>> Food delivery service, like chicken and boiled pork, is common in Korea.We can relax with talking by having a some food with together.>> We can relax while talking and having some food together.We become intimate with his friends.>> We became intimate with his friends.
OR >> We got close with his friends.So, his friends like to come to our home. >> That\'s why his friends like coming to our house.
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