[[이름] essay]Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home

2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Sometimes, my younger brother come back to home with his friends unexpectedly. It's a little bewildered to our family. However, we often order a fried chicken delivery. Delivery of chicken or boiled pork and so on is general in Korea. We can relax with talking by having a some food with together. We become intimate with his friends. So, his friends like to come to our home.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. My older brother would often do this too when I was in highschool. He would often invite his friends over after a game of basketball and they would make a big mess in the house. Haha! I guess your brother\'s friends are more behaved and well-mannered. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Sometimes, my younger brother come back to home with his friends unexpectedly.>> Sometimes my younger brother would come back home with his friends unexpectedly.It\'s a little bewildered to our family. >> Our family would get a little rattled because of that. OR >> Our family would get a little flustered because of that.However, we often order a fried chicken delivery.>> However, we would often order fried chicken for delivery. OR >> However, we would often have fried chicken delivered to our house.Delivery of chicken or boiled pork and so on is general in Korea.>> Food delivery service, like chicken and boiled pork, is common in Korea.We can relax with talking by having a some food with together.>> We can relax while talking and having some food together.We become intimate with his friends.>> We became intimate with his friends. OR >> We got close with his friends.So, his friends like to come to our home. >> That\'s why his friends like coming to our house.  

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