[[이름]_essay]Granted a change to be a foreigner, what nationality would you choose? Why?
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I think that most korean people would like choice American or English.
In korea, people are exposed in the stress of english from childhood to adult.
We are study English for a long time.
I know that Eglish language order is different to korean.
But, It is not a problem.
We have to speake and listen easily and freely without grammar book from children.
Grammar book is important, but it's really boring and diffidult.
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Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending this and the rest of your past homeworks!^^
It would be much better if you do homework daily so you don\'t have to do a lot
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Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I think that most korean people would like choice American or English.
>> I think that most Koreans would like to choose being an American or an English.In korea, people are exposed in the stress of english from childhood to adult.
>> In Korea, people are exposed to the stress of English from their childhood to adulthood.We are study English for a long time.
>> We study English for a long time.I know that Eglish language order is different to korean.
>> I know that the English language order is different from Korean.But, It is not a problem.
>> CORRECT
OR> It doesn\'t bother me.We have to speake and listen easily and freely without grammar book from children.
>> We have to speak and listen easily and freely without a grammar book from children.Grammar book is important, but it\'s really boring and diffidult.
>> A grammar book is important, but it\'s really boring and diffidult.
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