[[이름]_essay]Granted a change to be a foreigner, what nationality would you choose? Why?

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I think that most korean people would like choice American or English. In korea, people are exposed in the stress of english from childhood to adult. We are study English for a long time. I know that Eglish language order is different to korean. But, It is not a problem. We have to speake and listen easily and freely without grammar book from children. Grammar book is important, but it's really boring and diffidult.

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Hi [이름]!^^ Thank you for sending this and the rest of your past homeworks!^^ It would be much better if you do homework daily so you don\'t have to do a lot of writing for a lot of topics at one time. Still you did a great job!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think that most korean people would like choice American or English. >> I think that most Koreans would like to choose being an American or an English.In korea, people are exposed in the stress of english from childhood to adult. >> In Korea, people are exposed to the stress of English from their childhood to adulthood.We are study English for a long time. >> We study English for a long time.I know that Eglish language order is different to korean. >> I know that the English language order is different from Korean.But, It is not a problem. >> CORRECT OR> It doesn\'t bother me.We have to speake and listen easily and freely without grammar book from children. >> We have to speak and listen easily and freely without a grammar book from children.Grammar book is important, but it\'s really boring and diffidult. >> A grammar book is important, but it\'s really boring and diffidult.

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