[[이름]_essay]How important do you think is having a name?

2014-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Having a name is really important for self. The name is a representation for people. Therefore, We make a name with good meaning. Even we give a name to our pet. When who call my name, I feel a affection.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Nice answers!^^ Korean names are very unique. I wonder what your name means. Family names can also be a basis for origin and rank. In some places, we need to call people specific names to refer to them with respect!^^ Have a great day!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections fo you today: Having a name is really important for self. >> Having a name is really important for oneself.The name is a representation for people. >> CORRECT OR> The names represent people.Therefore, We make a name with good meaning. >> Therefore, we make a name with good meaning. Or> That is why we carry a name that is meaningful.Even we give a name to our pet. >> We even give names to our pets.When who call my name, I feel a affection. >> When I am called by my name, I feel affection/love.

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