[[이름]_essay]How important do you think is having a name?
학생이 쓴 원문
Having a name is really important for self.
The name is a representation for people.
Therefore, We make a name with good meaning.
Even we give a name to our pet.
When who call my name, I feel a affection.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Nice answers!^^
Korean names are very unique. I wonder what your name means.
Family names can also be a basis for origin and rank.
In some places, we need to call people specific names to refer to them
with respect!^^
Have a great day!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections fo you today:
Having a name is really important for self.
>> Having a name is really important for oneself.The name is a representation for people.
>> CORRECT
OR> The names represent people.Therefore, We make a name with good meaning.
>> Therefore, we make a name with good meaning.
Or> That is why we carry a name that is meaningful.Even we give a name to our pet.
>> We even give names to our pets.When who call my name, I feel a affection.
>> When I am called by my name, I feel affection/love.
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