[[이름]_essay]How should foreigners properly act in a Foreign country?

2014-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I went to foreign country in several time. Most people was kind for me because I'm foreigner for them. We can contact new culture in abroad. Sometimes, We can feeling that strange or reluctant. However, foreigners like that we are happy from their culture in their country. So, I think that foreigner need to have friendly attitude in other conuntry.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ I think that your idea is a good advice for foreigners. It\'s not a bad thing to adjust when we are in another country. If we are friendly then we might also end up meeting friendly people who can make our stay in that country memorable. Have a great day!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I went to foreign country in several time. >> I went to foreign countries in several times.Most people was kind for me because I\'m foreigner for them. >> Most people were kind to me because I\'m a foreigner for them.We can contact new culture in abroad. >> We can contact new culture abroad.Sometimes, We can feeling that strange or reluctant. >> Sometimes, we can feeling that it\'s strange or they are reluctant.However, foreigners like that we are happy from their culture in their country. >> However, foreigners like that we are happy because of their culture in their country.So, I think that foreigner need to have friendly attitude in other conuntry. >> So, I think that foreigners need to have a friendly attitude in other countries.

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