[[이름]_essay]If you are challenged to do something for the sake of charity, would you do it?

2014-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Yes, I do. I'd ever serviced repair on the house for the elderly. The elderly people Who lives alone can not repair their wallpaper and floor paper, themselves. So, Their house is dirty and exposured to the virus and bacteria. I know that it is really pleased for us helping others. I do think that people feel happiness and worth when other people are happy from me.

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Hi there [이름]^^ It is truly an amazing task to be part of people\'s lives. The less fortunate would appreciate even the tiniest help and it just a matter of having people care about them. It is always about the effort and making other people realize that some people need the help from others. You did a great job!^^ Thank you for answering and sharing. Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Yes, I do. >> CORRECT OR> Of course I will.I\'d ever serviced repair on the house for the elderly. >> I have serviced repair on the house for the elderly.The elderly people Who lives alone can not repair their wallpaper and floor paper, themselves. >> The elderly people who live alone cannot repair their wallpaper and floor paper by themselves. So, Their house is dirty and exposured to the virus and bacteria. >> So, their house is dirty and exposed to virus and bacteria. I know that it is really pleased for us helping others.>>I know that it is really pleasing for us to help others.I do think that people feel happiness and worth when other people are happy from me. >> I do think that people feel happiness and worth when other people are happy for them.

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