[[이름]_essay]In what situation do you think you are the most patient?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, when I talk to my professor, I think I'm the most patient.
My professor is boss for me.
Therefore, I have to be often obedient for him.
However, sometimes opinion between he and me is not matched.
At that time, I don't understand him actually.
But, I am effort to think about his position and attitude in every time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
How are you!^^
I think that you are diligent today to send me the homework!^^
Thank you for the effort.
I think that it is always best to be patient especially of we have to
for our job!^^ Your situation is a great example!^^
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Actually, when I talk to my professor, I think I\'m the most patient.
>>> CORRECT
OR> I think that I am most patient when I talk to my professor.My professor is boss for me.
>> My professor is like the boss for me.Therefore, I have to be often obedient for him.
>> CORRECT
OR> That is why I have to be obedient most of the time.However, sometimes opinion between he and me is not matched.
>> However, we sometimes do not have the same opinion.At that time, I don\'t understand him actually.
>> At that time, I don\'t actually understand him.
But, I am effort to think about his position and attitude in every time.
>> But I make an effort to think about his position and attitude every time.
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