[[이름]_essay]In what situation do you think you are the most patient?

2014-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Actually, when I talk to my professor, I think I'm the most patient. My professor is boss for me. Therefore, I have to be often obedient for him. However, sometimes opinion between he and me is not matched. At that time, I don't understand him actually. But, I am effort to think about his position and attitude in every time.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ How are you!^^ I think that you are diligent today to send me the homework!^^ Thank you for the effort. I think that it is always best to be patient especially of we have to for our job!^^ Your situation is a great example!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Actually, when I talk to my professor, I think I\'m the most patient. >>> CORRECT OR> I think that I am most patient when I talk to my professor.My professor is boss for me. >> My professor is like the boss for me.Therefore, I have to be often obedient for him. >> CORRECT OR> That is why I have to be obedient most of the time.However, sometimes opinion between he and me is not matched. >> However, we sometimes do not have the same opinion.At that time, I don\'t understand him actually. >> At that time, I don\'t actually understand him. But, I am effort to think about his position and attitude in every time. >> But I make an effort to think about his position and attitude every time.

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