[[이름]_essay]In your opinion what would be the best personality of a foreign teacher?
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There are so many foreign teacher in Korea.
Some koreans is shy to the foreign teacher.
So, They are not give fluently their problems or questions.
Therefore, I think that best personality of a foreign teacher is active atitute.
Korean want to give the interst for them from the teacher.
There are some famous foreign teacher like this in korea.
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Hi there [이름]!^^
Good job!^^
It does help to be an active person since during a conversation, the students
would also become active when they have a conversation.
Have a great weekend!^^
T.Debby^^
here are my corrections for you today:
There are so many foreign teacher in Korea.
>> CORRECT
Or> There are a lot of foreign teachers in Korea.
Some koreans is shy to the foreign teacher.>> Some Koreans are shy to the foreign teachers.So, They are not give fluently their problems or questions.>> So, They do not express their problems or ask questions frequently.Therefore, I think that best personality of a foreign teacher is active atitute.>> Therefore, I think that the best personality of a foreign teacher is an active attitude.Korean want to give the interst for them from the teacher. >> Koreans want that the teachers give them their interest.
There are some famous foreign teacher like this in korea. >> There are some famous foreign teachers like these in Korea.
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