[[이름]_essay]In your own opinion, how can common people help the Government?
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I think that common people can help the Government as inform public opinion.
The government is consist of few lawmakers.
So, it is difficult that they know worry and difficulty of common people.
Sometimes, They make a law to pasitive for themselves.
Therefore, common people have a constant interest in the government.
Especially, common people have to vote.
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Hi there [이름]^^
Thank you so much!^^
And I do agree with your answers.
A Government\'s role is to guide the people and not to
take things for their advantage.^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for ou today:
I think that common people can help the Government as inform public opinion.
>> I think that common people can help the Government a provider of public opinion.The government is consist of few lawmakers.
>> The Government is consist of a few lawmakers.So, it is difficult that they know worry and difficulty of common people.
>> So, it is difficult for them to know worries and the difficulties of common people.Sometimes, They make a law to pasitive for themselves.>> Sometimes, They make a law for their advantage.
Therefore, common people have a constant interest in the government.
>> Therefore, common people have a constant interest for the Government.
Especially, common people have to vote.
>> Especially, common people that have to vote.
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