[[이름]_essay]Is it right to sacrifice some animals to have our clothing? What do you think?

It's coming the winter season. This problem rise up in the every winter. Many people like the cloth or muffler made by some animals like rabbit, mink or fox. I know that so many mink dying for people's fashion items. Many animal lovers speak that don't have a mink jackets and mufflers. I agree that campaign. Moreover, nowadays technology of synthetic leather and hair was enhanced with high quality.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for your ideas. Sometimes people are selfish and take things that are not essentially what they need. They just want it. Fashion calls for trends and I think it gets to much if a lot of natural aspects are affected like animals. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: It\'s coming the winter season. >> The winter season is coming.This problem rise up in the every winter. >> This problem rises up every winter.Many people like the cloth or muffler made by some animals like rabbit, mink or fox. >> Many people like clothes or mufflers made from some animals like rabbits, minks or foxes.I know that so many mink dying for people\'s fashion items. >> I know that so many minks are dying for people\'s fashion items.Many animal lovers speak that don\'t have a mink jackets and mufflers. >> Many animal lovers say that they don\'t have a mink jackets and mufflers.I agree that campaign. >> I agree to that campaign.Moreover, nowadays technology of synthetic leather and hair was enhanced with high quality. >> Moreover, nowadays the technology of synthetic leather and hair was enhanced with high quality.