[[이름]_essay]Should there be a limit of cars on the road to lessen traffic? What do you think if it

I don't agree with the limit of cars on the road at a law. Many people have a own car. Some people have a lot of cars in their home. I know that traffic jam is a serious problem in the cities. However, the law can not control the right of the buying from personal. Environmental enhancement about traffic jam is need for us but revision of the law.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Sometimes the law would have to create complex rules that can affect amny things. If the law asks for people to think of the environment, it also means that the common peopla have to sacrifice a convinience. I think owning cars would be okay as long as we are responsible and reasonable with it!^^ Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I don\'t agree with the limit of cars on the road at a law. >> I don\'t agree with the limit of cars on the road as a law.Many people have a own car. >> Many people have their own cars.Some people have a lot of cars in their home. >> CORRECT OR> Some people own a lot of cars.I know that traffic jam is a serious problem in the cities. >> CORRECT OR> I am aware of traffic problems in cities.However, the law can not control the right of the buying from personal. >> However, the law can not control the right of buying for personal use.Environmental enhancement about traffic jam is need for us but revision of the law. >> Environmental enhancement for traffic jams is need for us but their should be a revision of the law.