[[이름]_essay]Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which

I prefer to live in a big city. I was born in the small city in Korea. We can not have a cultural benefit well in a small city. I immigrated into a big city closed to seoul when I was high-school student. Surely, although we live in a far city from the big city, nowadays we can take the many cultural somthing due to enhancement of the technology. However, some difficulty and niconvinience are still retained. So, I like the life in a big city with many people.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Choosing a location has many factors. I think a lot of people consider comfort the most. Thank you for sending your answers today. Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I prefer to live in a big city. >> CORRECT OR> I would rather be in a city.I was born in the small city in Korea. >> CORRECT Or> My hometown is a small city in Korea.We can not have a cultural benefit well in a small city. >> We can not have the priviledge of a cultural benefit in a small city. I immigrated into a big city closed to seoul when I was high-school student. >> I immigrated into a big city close to / near Seoul when I was a high-school student.Surely, although we live in a far city from the big city, nowadays we can take the many cultural somthing due to enhancement of the technology.>> Surely, although we live in a city that is far from the big city, nowadays, we can take many cultural aspects due to the enhancements of technology.However, some difficulty and niconvinience are still retained. >> However, there are some difficulties and inconviniences that are still retained. So, I like the life in a big city with many people. >> CORRECT OR> So I prefer the life in a big city with lots of people.