[[이름]_essay]What advantages does Korea have from all the other countries in the world?

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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This is frankly a difficult question. Korea have not a lot of resource and territory is smaller than other countries. However, korean very well know we can sucess with our sedulity in the world. I heard that korean in the other countries is more diligent. In korea, salesman leave the office too late. korean know that is not good culture. So, korean have a serious competition in the society.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Despite having a difficult question, you have managed a great answer!^^ Koreans are known to be hard-working individuals. That I think is a good impression to earn the trust of other people when it comes to career. Have a great day!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: This is frankly a difficult question. >> CORRECT Or> This is a challenging question.Korea have not a lot of resource and territory is smaller than other countries. >> Korea doesn\'t have a lot of resources and the territory is smaller than other countries. However, korean very well know we can sucess with our sedulity in the world. >> However, Koreans are very well know we can be sucessful with our security in the world.I heard that korean in the other countries is more diligent. >> I heard that a Korean in the other countries is more diligent.In korea, salesman leave the office too late. >> In Korea, salesmen leave the office too late.korean know that is not good culture. >> Koreans know that it is not a good culture. So, korean have a serious competition in the society. >> So, Koreans have a serious competition in the society.

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