[[이름]_essay]What are the things that you feel you owe to your parents?

2014-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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My parent are taking care me with no strings attached. They did spend a lot of money and time when I become adult. So, I think that I have to owe to my parents. If my parents become elderly people, I have to take care them like they give to me. Nowadays, ingratitude people are increasing in the world. Some ingratitude child are ammaizingly killed or throw away their parent. This is really terrible event.

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Hi there [이름]^^ I honestly can feel how nice you are to your parents. It does matter that we mut show our parents that we appreciate their love for us. How do you do that? T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: My parent are taking care me with no strings attached. >> CORRECT OR> My parents take care of me open-heartedly.They did spend a lot of money and time when I become adult. >> They did spend a lot of money and time when I became an adult.So, I think that I have to owe to my parents. >> So, I think that I owe it to my parents.If my parents become elderly people, I have to take care them like they give to me. >> If my parents become elderly people, I have to take care of them like they had given me.Nowadays, ingratitude people are increasing in the world. >> Nowadays, ungrateful people are increasing in the world.Some ingratitude child are ammaizingly killed or throw away their parent. >> Some ungrateful children are amazingly killed or thrown away by their parents.This is really terrible event. >> This is really a terrible event.

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