[[이름]_essay]What considerations do you have when you buy a mobile phone?

I like a small size mobile phone. Nowadays, mobile phone is released with wide window and large size. However, large mobile phone is not convinient to carry and grip. The other one consideration is memory capacity. Actually I want to change my mobile phone right now. That has a really small capacity. It is very important to young people.

                  Hi [이름]!^^ It\'s nice to hear your ideas!^^ Some people prefer a bigger screen for their phones. I consider durability. What phone do you own right now and why will you change it?^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I like a small size mobile phone. >> CORRECT OR> I prefer small moile phones.Nowadays, mobile phone is released with wide window and large size.>> Nowadays, mobile phone are released with wide windows and large sizes. However, large mobile phone is not convinient to carry and grip. >> However,a large mobile phone is inconvenient to carry and grip.The other one consideration is memory capacity. >> CORRECT OR> I also consider the memory.Actually I want to change my mobile phone right now. >> CORRECT OR> I honestly want to have a new phone right now.That has a really small capacity. >> This has a limited memory capacity.It is very important to young people. >> CORRECT OR> It is a must for young people.