[[이름]_essay]What do you appreciate most about your parents?

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

My parents are kind persons. Me and my younger brother and sister is most important to them, even themselves. They want not anything for us. I learned how to give the love to future spouse and child from my parents. I want to live like my parents.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^ We are lucky to have parents that take good care of us. They are perfect examples of people who are worth our time and love. I also think that they are lucky to have an appreciative child like you. Great answers today!^^ Take care.^^ T.Debby Here are my corrections for you today: My parents are kind persons. >> My parents are kind people. Me and my younger brother and sister is most important to them, even themselves. >> Me and my younger brother and sister are the most important to them, even themselves.They want not anything for us. >> They want nothing but us.I learned how to give the love to future spouse and child from my parents. >> I learned how to give the love to my future spouse and child from my parents.I want to live like my parents. >> CORRECT OR> I want a life like my parents.

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