[[이름]_essay]What do you appreciate most about your parents?
학생이 쓴 원문
My parents are kind persons.
Me and my younger brother and sister is most important to them, even themselves.
They want not anything for us.
I learned how to give the love to future spouse and child from my parents.
I want to live like my parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
We are lucky to have parents that take good care of us.
They are perfect examples of people who are worth our time and love.
I also think that they are lucky to have an appreciative child like you.
Great answers today!^^
Take care.^^
T.Debby
Here are my corrections for you today:
My parents are kind persons.
>> My parents are kind people.
Me and my younger brother and sister is most important to them, even themselves.
>> Me and my younger brother and sister are the most important to them, even themselves.They want not anything for us.
>> They want nothing but us.I learned how to give the love to future spouse and child from my parents.
>> I learned how to give the love to my future spouse and child from my parents.I want to live like my parents.
>> CORRECT
OR> I want a life like my parents.
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