[[이름]_essay]What do you think are the most important things to remember when we travel to another
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I went to several another countries for a trip or a conference.
I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember memory of other country.
We are forgot memories after a few times although that was fantastic and strange.
Taken pictures have landscape with younger me.
Writen diary have emotion and feeling with younger me.
When I sometimes take that pictures again, I can trip to the fast.
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Hi [이름]!^^
I wonder if you travel for adventure or just to relax?^^
It is very nice to travel and have great memories.
Who do you like travelling with?
It\'s never fun to travel alone and i guess with you your travel buddies
would include a camera and a diary!^^
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I went to several another countries for a trip or a conference.
>> I went to several other countries for a trip or a conference.
I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember memory of other country.
>> I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember the memory of other country.
We are forgot memories after a few times although that was fantastic and strange.
>> We are forget memories after a few times although they were fantastic and strange.Taken pictures have landscape with younger me.
>> Taking pictures of landscapes makes me feel younger.
Writen diary have emotion and feeling with younger me.
>> Writting in a diary has emotions and feelings with the younger me.When I sometimes take that pictures again, I can trip to the fast.
>> I can take a fast trip and take pictures.
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