[[이름]_essay]What do you think are the most important things to remember when we travel to another

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I went to several another countries for a trip or a conference. I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember memory of other country. We are forgot memories after a few times although that was fantastic and strange. Taken pictures have landscape with younger me. Writen diary have emotion and feeling with younger me. When I sometimes take that pictures again, I can trip to the fast.

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Hi [이름]!^^ I wonder if you travel for adventure or just to relax?^^ It is very nice to travel and have great memories. Who do you like travelling with? It\'s never fun to travel alone and i guess with you your travel buddies would include a camera and a diary!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I went to several another countries for a trip or a conference. >> I went to several other countries for a trip or a conference. I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember memory of other country. >> I think that taking a picture and writing a diary is best way to remember the memory of other country. We are forgot memories after a few times although that was fantastic and strange. >> We are forget memories after a few times although they were fantastic and strange.Taken pictures have landscape with younger me. >> Taking pictures of landscapes makes me feel younger. Writen diary have emotion and feeling with younger me. >> Writting in a diary has emotions and feelings with the younger me.When I sometimes take that pictures again, I can trip to the fast. >> I can take a fast trip and take pictures.

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