[[이름]_essay]What do you think is the best inheritance we get from our parents?

2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I think that money or house are not the best inheritance. I think the best inheritance is a character from our parents. Although parents give the money like real estate, it is possible to lose anytime. However, If parents teach the how to earn money to their children, They can earn a lot of money.

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Hello [이름]^^ As the saying goes \" Do not give a hungry man fish but rather teach them how to fish and they will never go hungry\". I love your ideas!^^ Keep them flowing.^^ Have a great day!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think that money or house are not the best inheritance.>> I think that money or houses are not the best inheritance.I think the best inheritance is a character from our parents. >> CORRECT OR> Inheriting character from parents is very important. Although parents give the money like real estate, it is possible to lose anytime. >> Although parents would give the mobey like real estate, it is possible to lose it anytime.However, If parents teach the how to earn money to their children, They can earn a lot of money. >> However, If parents teach their children  how to earn money, they can earn a lot of money.

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