[[이름]_essay]What do you think is the best way to comfort yourself from "homesickness"?

I know how hard the homesickness in abroad. Especially, When I was in aborad alone, I feel the homesickness strongly. I often cried in last summer in turkey for a month. I really wanted to see my parents and boyfriend. The best way to comfort homesickness is trip. I could forget the homesickness during a trip with a new culture.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Homesickness is very bad when we are aways from our family but you are correct!^^ Taking a trip and maybe meeting people can help us overcome this feeling!^^ Have a great day!^^ Take care^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I know how hard the homesickness in abroad. >> I know how hard the homesickness is when abroad.Especially, When I was in aborad alone, I feel the homesickness strongly. >> Especially, when I was abroad alone, I felt the homesickness strongly.I often cried in last summer in turkey for a month. >> I often cried for a month in Turkey last summer.I really wanted to see my parents and boyfriend. >> CORRECT Or> All I wanted was to see my parents and my boyfriend. The best way to comfort homesickness is trip.>> The besy way to comfort homesickness is to have a trip.I could forget the homesickness during a trip with a new culture.  >> CORRECT OR> being exposed to a new culture during a trip can help me forget about homesickness.