[[이름]_essay]What do you think is the main reason that married people have divorce?

I don't know exactly because I didn't marry. However, I heard that main reason of the divorce is a different of thinking. Actually, I don't understand that. Married people met the people which they have a different life during a long time. Therefore, They are basically different. I don't know why they are didn't that point. The divorce affects to their children very much.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for telling me your idea even if you are not familiar with the topic. I must agree that a lot of people come to a point that they do not understand their partners after being married. It affects children a lot. People must get to know their partners before getting married to them. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I don\'t know exactly because I didn\'t marry. >> I don\'t know exactly because I\'m not married.However, I heard that main reason of the divorce is a different of thinking. >> However, I heard that the main reason of the divorce is the difference in ideas. Actually, I don\'t understand that. >> CORRECT OR> I actually don\'t get it!Married people met the people which they have a different life during a long time. >> Married people meet the people which they had a different life a long time ago.Therefore, They are basically different. >> Therefore, they are basically different.I don\'t know why they are didn\'t that point. >> I don\'t know why they are didn\'t that get to a point.The divorce affects to their children very much. >> The divorce affects their children very much.