[[이름]_essay]What do you think is the most expensive thing that Koreans pay for?

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I think the most expensive thing in korea is the foreign brand closet, bag and shoes for women. Actually, I think the korean girls like the foreign brand for all about thing. However, tex for foreign brand is really high in korea department store. Thesedays, even some women go to the france or italy to shop bag. I heard that It's cheaper than kroea except to airplane fee. I think maybe that's reason is interference of korean people. Korean people have a excessive interference for other people.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Taking you for making the time to make your homework for today!^^ Please refer to \" Korea people\" as KOREANS. It\'s easier and more simple to use.^^ I would like to know what you think about branded things? Do you often buy international brands?^^ Have a great day!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think the most expensive thing in korea is the foreign brand closet, bag and shoes for women. >> I think the most expensive things in Korea are the foreign brand closet, like bags and shoes for women.Actually, I think the korean girls like the foreign brand for all about thing. >> Actually, I think the Korean girls like the foreign brands for one reason.However, tex for foreign brand is really high in korea department store. >> However, tax for a foreign brand is really high in a Korean department store.Thesedays, even some women go to the france or italy to shop bag. >> Thesedays, even some women go France or Italy to shop bags.I heard that It\'s cheaper than kroea except to airplane fee. >> I heard that it\'s cheaper than in Korea but except for the airplane fee.I think maybe that\'s reason is interference of korean people. >> I think maybe that\'s the reason there is an interference for Koreans.Korean people have a excessive interference for other people. >> Koreans have an excessive interference for other people.

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