[[이름]_essay]What do you think is the worst thing that can happen to you in a Foreign country?

When I went to Italy two years ago, I got stolen my cell phone in the Rome to a foreign man. So, actually I don't have a beautiful memory in Rome. I think that atitute to foreign people is very important. If the foreign people often get stolen their belongings or overcharged for the anything, they will have a bad memory for that country. Especially, the security should be strengthened in the tour seasons.

Hi there [이름]^^ Rome is such a \"place to be\" but I am sorry to hear that you have a bad memory there. I think that a stolen phone also means  a stolen part of memories since a lot of people keep important information on their mobile phones. Take care always!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: When I went to Italy two years ago, I got stolen my cell phone in the Rome to a foreign man. >> When I went to Italy years ago and my cellphone got stolen in Rome by a foreign man.So, actually I don\'t have a beautiful memory in Rome. >> CORRECTOR> I don\'t exactly have a great memory of Rome.I think that atitute to foreign people is very important. >> I think that attitude towards foreign people is very important.If the foreign people often get stolen their belongings or overcharged for the anything, they will have a bad memory for that country. >> If the foreign people often have their belongings stolen or overcharged for the anything, they will have a bad memory for that country.Especially, the security should be strengthened in the tour seasons. >> Especially, that security should be strengthened during the tour seasons.