[[이름]_essay]What do you think of people who have tattoos?^^
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Actually, old people think delinquent peopel for who ahve tattos.
Because many gansters have a tattos so much in their body.
However, nowadays many young people have a tattoos.
Moreover, temporary tattoos was developed already that retain a few weeks.
Therefore, many young peple have a temporary tattos at the beach in summer.
I like it, too.
That is a expression for free of the young people.
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Helo there [이름]!^^
Have you tried the temporary tattoo before? I think they use \"henna\" which
comes off the skin after a few washes or if it\'s dark enough it can stay for a few weeks.
I had \"henna tattoo\" before in a festival but it faded after a few weeks.
I think it\'s good if it not too much. I accept it as a form of art!^^
T.debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Actually, old people think delinquent peopel for who ahve tattos.
>> Actually old people think of people with tattoo as delinquents. Because many gansters have a tattos so much in their body.
>> Because a lot of gangsters ave a lot of tattoos in their bodies.However, nowadays many young people have a tattoos.
>> However, nowadays many young people have tattoos.Moreover, temporary tattoos was developed already that retain a few weeks.
>> Moreover, temporary tattoos were developed already that retain for a few weeks.Therefore, many young peple have a temporary tattos at the beach in summer.>> Therefore, many young people have a temporary tattoo at the beach in summer.
I like it, too.>> CORRECT
OR> I also do like it.That is a expression for free of the young people. >> That is an expression of freedom for the young people.
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