[[이름]_essay]What is something that you are most scared of?

2014-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I am extremely scared for horror movie. Actually I am still afraid ghost. I don't know why. Frankly, nowadays terrible person is more scary than ghost. However, I am afraid to ghost than person. I didn't never watch any horror movie after high-school.

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        Hi there [이름]!^^ So do you believe in ghosts? A lot of people say that they are real. I am brave enough to watch a horor movie if I have company but there are these movies that are extremely scary that I don\'t like to watch I might end up with nightmares.hahahaha Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I am extremely scared for horror movie. >> I am extremely scared of horror movies.Actually I am still afraid ghost. >> Actually I am still afraid of ghosts.I don\'t know why. >> CORRECT OR> I have no idea why.Frankly, nowadays terrible person is more scary than ghost.>> Frankly, nowadays a terrible person is scarier than a ghostHowever, I am afraid to ghost than person. >> However, I am afraid of a ghost than a person.I didn\'t never watch any horror movie after high-school. >> I have never watched any horror movies after high-school.

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