[[이름] essay]What is your favorite book, and why should people read it? State three reasons. Promot

2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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My favorite book is 'an ant' by Bernard Werber. I read this book when I was high school student. This book is consist of six books as series. This book was shocked to me. At first, it helped to increase my imagination, because an ants can communicate with human in that book. Second, it have plenty information of science. Finally, When we finish to read total six books, we likes reading a book. I didn't read book that more interesting.

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Hello [이름]! That book\'s plot is indeed interesting. And you said that it has six parts? I\'m a bit curious about the stories in each book. ^^ Thank you for sharing this. Please take note of the proper use of quotation marks and the capitalization in your essay. Keep up the good work! Kindly review the corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ My favorite book is \'an ant\' by Bernard Werber. >> CORRECT! >> \'an ant\' = \"An Ant\"I read this book when I was a high school student. >> CORRECT!This book is consist of six books as series. >> This book is a series with six parts. This book was shocked to me. >> This book was shocking to me. OR >> I was shocked by this book. At first, it helped to increase my imagination, because an ants can communicate with human in that book. >> At first, it helped increase my imagination because an ant can communicate with a human in that book. Second, it have plenty information of science. >> Second, it has plenty of information regarding Science. Finally, When we finish to read total six books, we likes reading a book. >> Finally, after finishing all six books, I started to like reading books. I didn\'t read book that more interesting. >> I haven\'t read a book that was more interesting than this one.    

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