[[이름]_essay]What kind of art do you think is the most interesting?

2014-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I like to watch a painting art in the exibition center. I don't have a ability for the painting. So, I think that painting artist is amazing person. I know painting could indicate a lot of meaning for people. There is so many kind of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc. Among them, I prefer landsdcape with tree and river.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you so much for sending this. Art is really an impression of how a person feels. When you describe your preference of art it means that you are also describing yourself. I admire artists who can do many kinds of art. I do think that there is an artist in each one of use. Which one are you?^^ Great job for today!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I like to watch a painting art in the exibition center. >> CORRECT OR> I would like to see an art being painted in an exhibition. I don\'t have a ability for the painting. >> I don\'t have a ability for painting. So, I think that painting artist is amazing person. >> So, I think that  a painting artist is an amazing person.I know painting could indicate a lot of meaning for people. >> I know paintings could indicate a lot of meaning for people. There is so many kind of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc. >>There are so many kinds of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc.Among them, I prefer landsdcape with tree and river. >> Among them, I prefer a landsdcape with a tree and  a river.

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