[[이름]_essay]What kind of art do you think is the most interesting?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to watch a painting art in the exibition center.
I don't have a ability for the painting.
So, I think that painting artist is amazing person.
I know painting could indicate a lot of meaning for people.
There is so many kind of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc.
Among them, I prefer landsdcape with tree and river.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for sending this.
Art is really an impression of how a person feels.
When you describe your preference of art it means that
you are also describing yourself.
I admire artists who can do many kinds of art.
I do think that there is an artist in each one of use.
Which one are you?^^
Great job for today!^^
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I like to watch a painting art in the exibition center.
>> CORRECT
OR> I would like to see an art being painted in an exhibition.
I don\'t have a ability for the painting.
>> I don\'t have a ability for painting.
So, I think that painting artist is amazing person.
>> So, I think that a painting artist is an amazing person.I know painting could indicate a lot of meaning for people.
>> I know paintings could indicate a lot of meaning for people.
There is so many kind of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc.
>>There are so many kinds of painting such as portrait,landscape, etc.Among them, I prefer landsdcape with tree and river.
>> Among them, I prefer a landsdcape with a tree and a river.
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