[[이름]_essay]What kind of business do you think is suited for your skills and abilities and your at
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to educate the students in the university in future.
I'm a Ph.D student in department of chemical engineering.
I have a interest for my reserch and subject.
I think that education in university is important to developmnt of nation.
Scientific technology is develpoing rapidly worldwide.
I can study and work constantly in our research field.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
It\'s never enough to have talents that we do not use to help others.
It is good that you make goals to help other people with your knowledge.
Keep up the good work always [이름]!^^
Take care.
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I want to educate the students in the university in future.
>> I want to educate the students in the University in the future.I\'m a Ph.D student in department of chemical engineering.
>> I\'m a Ph.D student in the department of chemical engineering.I have a interest for my reserch and subject.
>> I have an interest for my research and subject.I think that education in university is important to developmnt of nation.
>> I think that education in the University is important to development of the nation.Scientific technology is develpoing rapidly worldwide.
>> CORRECT
OR> There is a world-wide boost in Scientific technology.I can study and work constantly in our research field.
>> CORRECT
OR> I can work continuously in my reaserch field.
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