[[이름]_essay]What kind of media (TV, newspaper, etc) do you think is the most influential to young

Thesedays, SNS such as facebook or instagram is most influential media for young adults. Most young people have a smart cell phone. Moreover, they are sensitive to trend. SNS promotes that they look like important social person. I have a ID for SNS. However, These situation is big problem. We are losing the sociality.

Hi there [이름]!^^ I do agree with losing our sociabilty. Sometimes friendship relies on how many friends we have on facebook which is wrong. Some young people nowadays prefer staying home or hanging out in coffee shops but they don\'t talk and they just have their phones and internet. It\'s sad but true,!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my correctiosn for you today: Thesedays, SNS such as facebook or instagram is most influential media for young adults. >> Thesedays, SNS such as facebook or instagram are most influential medias for young adults.Most young people have a smart cell phone. >> CORRECT OR> A lot of young people own smart mobile phones.Moreover, they are sensitive to trend. >> CORRECT OR> Moreover, they are fully aware to trends.SNS promotes that they look like important social person. >> SNS promotes that they look like an important social person.I have a ID for SNS. >> CORRECT OR> I am registered to SNSHowever, These situation is big problem. >> However, These situation is a big problem.We are losing the sociality. >> We are losing sociability.