[[이름]_essay]What Korean Holiday is the most interesting for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
New year's day is most interasting holiday for me.
New year's day is Sul-nal in korean.
The day is not January 1 in common calender.
It can be finded in lunar calender.
In that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary.
We have a some bow ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents.
And then, elder people give me the money for the present.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Holidays should not only be about having a \"no school\" or \"no work\"
day but it\'s about celebrating a good day for important people.
Each country celebrates holidays differently and right now I have my holidays the
same as Koreans since we follow the Korean holidays. I do hope I get
to celebrate it just like you do and receive money and eat rice cakes!^^ hahahahaha
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
New year\'s day is most interasting holiday for me.
>> CORRECT
OR> I consider New Years day as the most interesting holiday.New year\'s day is Sul-nal in korean.
>> CORRECT
OR> We call it Sul-nal in Korea.The day is not January 1 in common calender.
>> That day is not similar to January 1 in the common calendar.It can be finded in lunar calender.
>> It can be found in the Lunar Calendar.In that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary.
>> On that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary.We have a some bow ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents.
>> We have a some bowing ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents.
And then, elder people give me the money for the present.
>> CORRECT
OR> I get to receive money from the elders too!^^
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