[[이름]_essay]What Korean Holiday is the most interesting for you?

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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New year's day is most interasting holiday for me. New year's day is Sul-nal in korean. The day is not January 1 in common calender. It can be finded in lunar calender. In that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary. We have a some bow ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents. And then, elder people give me the money for the present.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!^^ Holidays should not only be about having a \"no school\" or \"no work\" day but it\'s about celebrating a good day for important people. Each country celebrates holidays differently and right now I have my holidays the same as Koreans since we follow the Korean holidays. I do hope I get to celebrate it just like you do and receive money and eat rice cakes!^^  hahahahaha Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: New year\'s day is most interasting holiday for me. >> CORRECT OR> I consider New Years day as the most interesting holiday.New year\'s day is Sul-nal in korean. >> CORRECT OR> We call it Sul-nal in Korea.The day is not January 1 in common calender. >> That day is not similar to January 1 in the common calendar.It can be finded in lunar calender. >> It can be found in the Lunar Calendar.In that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary. >> On that day, I write the annual plan in my new diary.We have a some bow ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents. >> We have a some bowing ceremony for elder people like parents and grandparents. And then, elder people give me the money for the present. >> CORRECT OR> I get to receive money from the elders too!^^

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