[[이름]_essay]What Korean product would you like to be internationally promoted? Why?

2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Among the korean product, There are selfie bar. Nowadays, selfie bar is famous between the young people. If we have a selfie bar, We can take a picture for us with landscapes. The disadvantage is that our face is filled out the screen of the cell phone, When I take a picture myself. So, many korean people have a selfie bar thesedays. Even the professor I know bought the selfie bar for me in korea. It's really funny and interesting item.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for this answer!^^ A selfie bar in Korea is referred to as \"monopod\" by foreigners. Sometimes it looks awkward but then again it\'s practical for group pictures!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Among the korean product, There are selfie bar. >> Among the korean products, there are selfie bars. Nowadays, selfie bar is famous between the young people. >> Nowadays, a selfie bar is famous for the young people.If we have a selfie bar, We can take a picture for us with landscapes. >> If we have a selfie bar, we can take a picture for us with landscapes.The disadvantage is that our face is filled out the screen of the cell phone, When I take a picture myself. >> The disadvantage is that our faces fill out the screen of the cell phone when I take a picture myself.So, many korean people have a selfie bar thesedays. >> So, many Koreans have a selfie bar thesedays. Even the professor I know bought the selfie bar for me in korea. >> Even the professor I know bought the selfie bar for me in Korea.It\'s really funny and interesting item. >> It\'s really a funny and an interesting item.

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