[[이름]_essay]What very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world

In order to be successful in the world today, We should learn the speach skill to comunicate the exact intention. English skill is basic actually, nowadays. There are some people which have a outstanding speach skill like steve Jobs. They can appeal their purpose and intention. This is very important point. Quite people say only thinks not the point when they have a presentation or report their performance.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Speaking is sometimes different with expressing. We must make it a point to deliver our message with emotions. When we study speaking, we include stress and intonation because it helps us to express our emotions effectively. Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: In order to be successful in the world today, We should learn the speach skill to comunicate the exact intention.>> In order to be successful in the world today, we should learn the speech skills to comunicate our exact intention. English skill is basic actually, nowadays. >> CORRECT OR> English is actually a basic skill nowadays.There are some people which have a outstanding speach skill like steve Jobs. >> There are some people who have an outstanding speech skill like Steve Jobs.They can appeal their purpose and intention. >> CORRECT OR> They can express their intentions and emotions.This is very important point. >> This is a very important point.Quite people say only thinks not the point when they have a presentation or report their performance. >> Some people say only what they think of and not the point when they have a presentation or a report of their performance.