[[이름]_essay]What would be something that you think is interesting to collect? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
A few years ago, I collected some coins that it was produced in 1987.
I was born in september 1987.
I heard that if I have a coin produced when I was born, It would bring good luck.
So, I have about 40 coins.
It was a pretty interesting hobby for me.
Whenever I receive some coins in supermarket or mart, I confirmed it's produced year.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
That was interesting information!^^
I was born 1988 and I never saw a coin produced the same year. I will
try to look for one.^^
Thank you!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
A few years ago, I collected some coins that it was produced in 1987.
>>A few years ago, I collected some coins that it were produced in 1987.
I was born in september 1987.
>> CORRECT
OR> 1987 was the year i was born.I heard that if I have a coin produced when I was born, It would bring good luck.>> CORRECT
OR> It would be lucky to own a coin that was produced on the same year that I was born.
So, I have about 40 coins.
>> CORRECT
OR> I own about 40 coins.It was a pretty interesting hobby for me.
>> CORRECT
OR> It was an interesting hobby for me.Whenever I receive some coins in supermarket or mart, I confirmed it\'s produced year.
>> Whenever I receive some coins in supermarket or mart, I confirmed it\'s production year.
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