[[이름]_essay]What would you consider as an economic weakness of Korea?

My friends are almost salesman. But, I'm a student yet. So, When i meet my friends and shop with them, sometimes I feel a little shame. I know that I can earn considerable money after graduation. Nevertheless, i often think that I need a lot of money. So, sometimes I envy my friends.

Hi there [이름]!^^ How are you today. I have noticed that you did your homework for more than a day. I think that it would be easier if you make it daily so you won\'t have a hard time doing it. Still, your ideas are great.^^ I have the same feeling if I am with friends who have better jobs and salaries than me. But then I have learned not to be shy or shameful because sometimes they shop too much that they spend unreasonable anounts of money on some things. Always smile!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: My friends are almost salesman. >> My friends are almost salesmen.But, I\'m a student yet. >> CORRECT OR> I am still a student.So, When i meet my friends and shop with them, sometimes I feel a little shame. >> So, When i meet my friends and shop with them, sometimes I feel a little shy.I know that I can earn considerable money after graduation. >> CORRECT OR> I could earn a good amount of money when I graduate.Nevertheless, i often think that I need a lot of money. >> Nevertheless, I often think that I need a lot of money.So, sometimes I envy my friends. >> CORRECT OR> I feel envious with my friends sometimes.