[[이름]_essay]Why do you think confidence is very important for speakers?
학생이 쓴 원문
Speaker is the hero in that place and that time.
He or She should make understanding and impression to the audiences.
So, speaker have to speak only the truth.
When we speak the truth confidencely to others, people are impressed.
If this is for the items or anything to sell, furthermore you have to speak confidencely.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Wow you have your typing skills very active today!^^
You are doing a great job!^^
Confidence is very important even for a student like you.
To be comfortable to speak you mind would mak a big difference
and a sense of acheivment is always easy to have when you have this!^^
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Speaker is the hero in that place and that time.
>> CORRECT
OR> The speaker would be the most important person in that situation.He or She should make understanding and impression to the audiences.
>> He or she should make an understanding and impression to the audience.So, speaker have to speak only the truth.
>> So, the speaker has to speak only the truth.When we speak the truth confidencely to others, people are impressed.
>> When we speak the truth confidently to others, people are impressed.If this is for the items or anything to sell, furthermore you have to speak confidencely.
>> If this is for the items or anything for sale, furthermore, you have to speak confidently.
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