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2015-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Q. What would you do if you were late for an important appointment? If I am late for an important appointment, I call the person who make the appointment in advance. So, I ask that person whether you will come late. However, I know that frequent delay is really bad for my image. I make an effort to not late for an appointment. Actually, many Korean girls are often late to the dating with their boyfriend. We have to perceive that that can become bad habit.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for diligently doing your homework. I totally agree with you! Being late for an appointment could ruin your image. It\'s a nasty habit and sadly a lot of people have it. You did a good job here! Keep up the good work! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ If I am late for an important appointment, I call the person who make the appointment in advance. >> If I am late for an important appointment, I would call the person who made the appointment in advance. So, I ask that person whether you will come late. >> So I would ask that person if he could come later. However, I know that frequent delay is really bad for my image. >> However, I know that delaying an appointment frequently is bad for my image. I make an effort to not late for an appointment. >> I make an effort not to be late for an appointment. Actually, many Korean girls are often late to the dating with their boyfriend. >> Actually, many Korean girls are often late on their date with their boyfriends. We have to perceive that that can become bad habit. >> We perceive that as a bad habit.  

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