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2015-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Cut corners. - If we want to live well after marriage, we have to try cut corners as much as possible. - The process is able to cut corners on production cost. 2. Don't count your chickens before the eggs have hatched. - My mom told me that she will leave a lot of money in her will, but I'm not going to count my chickens before the eggs have hatched. - You have to not count your chickens before the eggs have hatches for a rainy day. 3. Don't give up (someone's) day job. - I've seen your paintings. Don't give up your day job. - I'm sorry. Actually your singing is terrible! Don't give up your day job.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I enjoyed reading your composition. Your examples were amusing and very witty. I hope you\'ll continue to polish your writing skills and don\'t forget the meanings of these idioms. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ 1. Cut corners.- If we want to live well after marriage, we have to try cut corners as much as possible. >> If we want to live well after marriage, we have to try to cut corners as much as possible. - The process is able to cut corners on production cost.>> CORRECT!2. Don\'t count your chickens before the eggs have hatched.- My mom told me that she will leave a lot of money in her will, but I\'m not going to count my chickens before the eggs have hatched. >> CORRECT!- You have to not count your chickens before the eggs have hatches for a rainy day.>> Do not count your chickens before the eggs have hatched during rainy days. 3. Don\'t give up (someone\'s) day job.- I\'ve seen your paintings. Don\'t give up your day job. >> CORRECT!- I\'m sorry. Actually, your singing is terrible! Don\'t give up your day job. >> CORRECT!

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