[[이름] homework]
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I couldn't live without microwave in my home.
I use it everyday night after leaving office.
Sometimes I heat milk for relax of body.
And, I like to apply a hot towel on my abdomen.
It makes me relaxed and comforted.
I think microwave is cheap and useful appliance in the house.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I have to agree with you. I love having a microwave too. It\'s very convenient and useful. Thanks for sharing!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
I couldn\'t live without microwave in my home.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I couldn\'t live without a microwave at home. - betterI use it everyday night after leaving office.
>> I use it every night after coming home from the office.
Sometimes I heat milk for relax of body.
>> Sometimes I heat some milk to help my body relax.
And, I like to apply a hot towel on my abdomen.
>> CORRECT!It makes me relaxed and comforted.
>> It makes me feel relaxed and it\'s comforting.
I think microwave is cheap and useful appliance in the house.
>> I think the microwave is one of the cheapest and most useful appliances in the house.
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