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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I couldn't live without microwave in my home. I use it everyday night after leaving office. Sometimes I heat milk for relax of body. And, I like to apply a hot towel on my abdomen. It makes me relaxed and comforted. I think microwave is cheap and useful appliance in the house.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I have to agree with you. I love having a microwave too. It\'s very convenient and useful. Thanks for sharing! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I couldn\'t live without microwave in my home. >> CORRECT! OR >> I couldn\'t live without a microwave at home. - betterI use it everyday night after leaving office. >> I use it every night after coming home from the office. Sometimes I heat milk for relax of body. >> Sometimes I heat some milk to help my body relax. And, I like to apply a hot towel on my abdomen. >> CORRECT!It makes me relaxed and comforted. >> It makes me feel relaxed and it\'s comforting. I think microwave is cheap and useful appliance in the house. >> I think the microwave is one of the cheapest and most useful appliances in the house.  

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