[[이름] homework]
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Don't put all your eggs in one basket.
- It's never a good idea to put all your eggs in one basket.
- If you want to not bankrupt, don't put all your eggs in one basket.
2. Drastic times call for drastic measures.
- I was broke and drastic times call for drastic measures.
- Do drastic times call for drastic measures?
3. Elvis has left the building.
- Elvis has left the building and the show was over.
- Ladies and gentlemen, Elvis has left the building.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m sure that you wouldn\'t be the kind of person who would put all her eggs in one basket. :) Don\'t worry, in case you feel like you can\'t do it, just think about another option. If all else fails, then drastic times call for drastic measures.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
1. Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket.- It\'s never a good idea to put all your eggs in one basket.
>> CORRECT!- If you want to not bankrupt, don\'t put all your eggs in one basket.>> If you don\'t want to go bankrupt, don\'t put all your eggs in one basket.
2. Drastic times call for drastic measures.- I was broke and drastic times call for drastic measures.
>> CORRECT!- Do drastic times call for drastic measures?>> CORRECT!3. Elvis has left the building.- Elvis has left the building and the show was over.
>> CORRECT!- Ladies and gentlemen, Elvis has left the building.
>> CORRECT!
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