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2015-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Don't put all your eggs in one basket. - It's never a good idea to put all your eggs in one basket. - If you want to not bankrupt, don't put all your eggs in one basket. 2. Drastic times call for drastic measures. - I was broke and drastic times call for drastic measures. - Do drastic times call for drastic measures? 3. Elvis has left the building. - Elvis has left the building and the show was over. - Ladies and gentlemen, Elvis has left the building.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m sure that you wouldn\'t be the kind of person who would put all her eggs in one basket. :) Don\'t worry, in case you feel like you can\'t do it, just think about another option. If all else fails, then drastic times call for drastic measures. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  1. Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket.- It\'s never a good idea to put all your eggs in one basket. >> CORRECT!- If you want to not bankrupt, don\'t put all your eggs in one basket.>> If you don\'t want to go bankrupt, don\'t put all your eggs in one basket. 2. Drastic times call for drastic measures.- I was broke and drastic times call for drastic measures. >> CORRECT!- Do drastic times call for drastic measures?>> CORRECT!3. Elvis has left the building.- Elvis has left the building and the show was over. >> CORRECT!- Ladies and gentlemen, Elvis has left the building. >> CORRECT!

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