[[이름] homework]

2015-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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If I have $10,000, I want to go to trip with my family at first. I am getting married at August of this year. So, I don't have much time with my family. My mother like my fiance, but she is sad because we don't line together. I know my mother's feeling very well. However, I spend much time with future husband nowadays. We have a lot of things to do for wedding and new life. Moreover, most money that we have is spend for wedding. So, if I have a lot of money, I want to spend for my family. I really love my family so much But, I love my husband too.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It seems like you are caught in a bit of a dilemma. I hope I could help you out, but I\'m not married yet. Haha! It\'s all up to you. Good sentences here! You just forgot a few words in some of your sentences so please take note of that. Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ If I have $10,000, I want to go to trip with my family at first. >> If I have $10,000, first, I want to go on a trip with my family. I am getting married at August of this year. >> I am getting married this August. So, I don\'t have much time with my family. >> CORRECT!My mother like my fiance, but she is sad because we don\'t line together. >> My mother likes my fiance, but she is sad because we won\'t be living together anymore.I know my mother\'s feeling very well. >> I know how my mother feels.However, I spend too much time with my future husband nowadays. >> CORRECT!We have a lot of things to do for our wedding and our new life. >> CORRECT!Moreover, most money that we have is spend for wedding. >> Moreover, most of the money that we have is going to our wedding expenses. OR >> Moreover, most of our money would be spent on our wedding. So, if I have a lot of money, I want to spend it on my family. >> CORRECT!I really love my family so much. >> CORRECT!But, I love my husband too. >> CORRECT!  

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