[[이름] homework]
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If I have $10,000, I want to go to trip with my family at first.
I am getting married at August of this year.
So, I don't have much time with my family.
My mother like my fiance, but she is sad because we don't line together.
I know my mother's feeling very well.
However, I spend much time with future husband nowadays.
We have a lot of things to do for wedding and new life.
Moreover, most money that we have is spend for wedding.
So, if I have a lot of money, I want to spend for my family.
I really love my family so much
But, I love my husband too.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! It seems like you are caught in a bit of a dilemma. I hope I could help you out, but I\'m not married yet. Haha! It\'s all up to you. Good sentences here! You just forgot a few words in some of your sentences so please take note of that. Keep it up!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
If I have $10,000, I want to go to trip with my family at first.
>> If I have $10,000, first, I want to go on a trip with my family.
I am getting married at August of this year.
>> I am getting married this August.
So, I don\'t have much time with my family.
>> CORRECT!My mother like my fiance, but she is sad because we don\'t line together.
>> My mother likes my fiance, but she is sad because we won\'t be living together anymore.I know my mother\'s feeling very well.
>> I know how my mother feels.However, I spend too much time with my future husband nowadays.
>> CORRECT!We have a lot of things to do for our wedding and our new life.
>> CORRECT!Moreover, most money that we have is spend for wedding.
>> Moreover, most of the money that we have is going to our wedding expenses.
OR >> Moreover, most of our money would be spent on our wedding.
So, if I have a lot of money, I want to spend it on my family.
>> CORRECT!I really love my family so much.
>> CORRECT!But, I love my husband too.
>> CORRECT!
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