[[이름] homework]
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Nowadays, I am so busy due to the my study in laboratory.
So, I don't have a relax time for me.
I want to go to the trip with my fiance.
In other words, I want to leave the routine.
I think that watching movie is best method to relieve the stress if I don't have a sufficient time.
A few days ago, I watched the King's man movie with my boyfriend.
It was really nice to relieve my stress.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Watching a movie is indeed the best way to unwind after a stressful week at school or at work. It\'s my favorite stress-reliever too. And chocolates. Haha! Thanks for sharing. I hope you can unwind and relax this weekend.
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Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Nowadays, I am so busy due to the my study in laboratory.>> Nowadays, I am so busy due to my studies in the laboratory.
So, I don\'t have a relax time for me.
>> So I don\'t have time to relax.
I want to go to the trip with my fiance.
>> I want to go on a trip with my fiance.In other words, I want to leave the routine.
>> In other words, I want to escape my routine.
I think that watching movie is best method to relieve the stress if I don\'t have a sufficient time.
>> I think that watching a movie is the best method to relieve stress if I don\'t have sufficient time.
A few days ago, I watched the King\'s man movie with my boyfriend.
>> CORRECT!
>> \"Kingsman\"It was really nice to relieve my stress.
>> It was a nice movie that helped me relieve my stress.
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