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2015-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Nowadays, I am so busy due to the my study in laboratory. So, I don't have a relax time for me. I want to go to the trip with my fiance. In other words, I want to leave the routine. I think that watching movie is best method to relieve the stress if I don't have a sufficient time. A few days ago, I watched the King's man movie with my boyfriend. It was really nice to relieve my stress.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Watching a movie is indeed the best way to unwind after a stressful week at school or at work. It\'s my favorite stress-reliever too. And chocolates. Haha! Thanks for sharing. I hope you can unwind and relax this weekend. Please check my corrections below! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Nowadays, I am so busy due to the my study in laboratory.>> Nowadays, I am so busy due to my studies in the laboratory. So, I don\'t have a relax time for me. >> So I don\'t have time to relax. I want to go to the trip with my fiance. >> I want to go on a trip with my fiance.In other words, I want to leave the routine. >> In other words, I want to escape my routine. I think that watching movie is best method to relieve the stress if I don\'t have a sufficient time. >> I think that watching a movie is the best method to relieve stress if I don\'t have sufficient time. A few days ago, I watched the King\'s man movie with my boyfriend. >> CORRECT! >> \"Kingsman\"It was really nice to relieve my stress. >> It was a nice movie that helped me relieve my stress.    

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