[[이름] homework]

2015-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

What is the most challenging part of your job or your studies? What i the mot rewarding part? - I am a Ph.D student in the department of chemical engineering. - I have many experiments and studies everyday. - When I start experiment of new theme, It's a nervous for me. - Sometimes I use a dangerous reactant in the laboratory. - So, I have to find out the suggestions before experiments. - However, experiments and presentation for my studies make me happy and excited. - So, I want to become the researcher in the university.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. As much as we dislike our jobs, the rewarding part always motivates us to try harder. I hope you\'ll achieve your dream of becoming a researcher in your university someday. Good luck! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ - I am a Ph.D student in the department of chemical engineering. >> CORRECT!- I have many experiments and studies everyday. >> CORRECT!- When I start experiment of new theme, It\'s a nervous for me. >> When I start an experiment with a new concept, I feel nervous. - Sometimes I use a dangerous reactant in the laboratory. >> CORRECT!- So, I have to find out the suggestions before the experiments. >> CORRECT!- However, these experiments and presentations for my studies make me happy and excited. >> CORRECT!- So, I want to become the researcher in the university. >> CORRECT! >> the = a  

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