[이름]'s diary today
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Sally.
I was very busy today because we had a business meeting to start new project.
So I modified the meeting handout and print it out.
After bring it to my boss, my work was done.
So I went to downstairs to attend English class.
Our company give us an opportunity to study English.
English teacher come to our office, we are studying English at after lunch.
After work, I met my boyfriend and we had dinner together.
The menu was pasta, pizza and salad and we also drunk wine.
In our calling time, you were impressed with my work.
I’m working in oceanographic and coastal engineering company. I usually carry out the research of the ocean and do programming about the atmosphere and ocean. I love my work. But these days I think I need to study more because I don’t know exactly about my work.
Anyway I feel good tonight. Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi!^^
Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. I\'m really impressed to hear that you enjoy your job and you still find time to study English even if you\'re working. I know you are a smart person and you will be a better English speaker in no time. Just believe in yourself^^ See you in class.
T. Sally
Hi, Sally.
>> Correct!I was very busy today because we had a business meeting to start new project.
>> I was very busy today because we had a business meeting regarding a new project that we are starting.So I modified the meeting handout and print it out.
>> Correct!After bring it to my boss, my work was done.
>> After bringing it to my boss, my work was done.So I went to downstairs to attend English class.>> So I went downstairs to attend my English class.
Our company give us an opportunity to study English.
>> Our company gives us an opportunity to study English.English teacher come to our office, we are studying English at after lunch.
>> The English teacher goes to our office and we study English after lunch.After work, I met my boyfriend and we had dinner together.
>> Correct!The menu was pasta, pizza and salad and we also drunk wine.
>> Correct!In our calling time, you were impressed with my work.
>> During our call time, you will be impressed with my work.I\'m working in an oceanographic and coastal engineering company.
>> Correct!
I usually carry out the research of the ocean and do programming about the atmosphere and ocean.
>> Correct!
I love my work.
>> Correct!
But these days I think I need to study more because I don\'t know exactly about my work.
>> But these days I think I need to study more because I don\'t know exactly what my work is all about.Anyway I feel good tonight.
>> Correct!
Bye!
>> Correct!
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