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If I can live in anywhere I want for one year, I hope to live in Italy or France.
I have been trip to several nation of the Europe.
Among them, France and Italy was really beautiful to me.
I want to go there again.
Landscape and culture of Europe is different with our contury.
Some people think the nations are romantic place.
Expecially, I want to go venice again with my fiance.
I think that most beautiful city is there.
All buildings are floating in the ocean, and bridges are connected with two buildings.
However, I think if I can get a chance, I have to forcibly live in America due to English.
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Hello [이름]! We totally have the same dream destination! European countries are so sophisticated and posh! I would love to live in Italy too. But I would probably live in Rome, not Venice. :) Thanks for sharing here. I hope you could go back to Venice with your fiance soon.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
If I can live in anywhere I want for one year, I hope to live in Italy or France.
>> If I can live anywhere I want for one year, I hope to live in Italy or France.
I have been trip to several nation of the Europe.
>> I have been to several European countries before.
OR >> I went on a trip to several European countries before.
Among them, France and Italy was really beautiful to me. >> Among them, the most beautiful countries for me were France and Italy.
I want to go there again.
>> CORRECT!Landscape and culture of Europe is different with our contury.
>> The landscape and culture of Europe are different with our country.
Some people think the nations are romantic place.
>> Some people think that Europe is full of romantic places.
Expecially, I want to go venice again with my fiance.
>> I especially want to go to Venice again with my fiance.
I think that most beautiful city is there.
>> I think that is the most beautiful city in the world.
All buildings are floating in the ocean, and bridges are connected with two buildings.
>> All the houses are floating in the river and they are connected by bridges.
However, I think if I can get a chance, I have to forcibly live in America due to English.
>> However, I think that if I get this chance, I will be forced to live in America because I have to learn English.
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