[[이름]'s homework]
학생이 쓴 원문
My latest movie in the theater is Kingsman.
I saw the movie with my boyfriend.
It was extremely funny and interesting.
I like an action or a SF movie.
There are a lot of curious weapon in that movie.
So, I am funny for the movie.
Sometimes I relieve my stress easily with funny movie.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I still haven\'t seen this movie! It is not showing in the theater anymore so I have to find an \'online\' version. ^^ Thanks for sharing here. I\'m so excited to see it. Kindly take note of the proper use of articles in your sentences.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
My latest movie in the theater is Kingsman.
>> The latest movie that I saw in the theater was \"Kingsman\". I saw the movie with my boyfriend.
>> CORRECT! It was extremely funny and interesting.
>> CORRECT! I like an action or a SF movie.
>> I like action and science fiction movies.There are a lot of curious weapon in that movie.
>> CORRECT! So, I am funny for the movie. >> So I had fun watching that movie.
Sometimes I relieve my stress easily with funny movie.
>> Sometimes I can easily relieve my stress by watching a funny movie.
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