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2015-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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My latest movie in the theater is Kingsman. I saw the movie with my boyfriend. It was extremely funny and interesting. I like an action or a SF movie. There are a lot of curious weapon in that movie. So, I am funny for the movie. Sometimes I relieve my stress easily with funny movie.

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Hello [이름]! I still haven\'t seen this movie! It is not showing in the theater anymore so I have to find an \'online\' version. ^^ Thanks for sharing here. I\'m so excited to see it. Kindly take note of the proper use of articles in your sentences. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ My latest movie in the theater is Kingsman. >> The latest movie that I saw in the theater was \"Kingsman\".        I saw the movie with my boyfriend. >> CORRECT! It was extremely funny and interesting. >> CORRECT! I like an action or a SF movie. >> I like action and science fiction movies.There are a lot of curious weapon in that movie. >> CORRECT! So, I am funny for the movie. >> So I had fun watching that movie. Sometimes I relieve my stress easily with funny movie. >> Sometimes I can easily relieve my stress by watching a funny movie.

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