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In our life, we have a failure not a few. We were depressed and flustrated in that time. I could depressed during a few days, too. However, I know that I have to overcome and rise up again. So, We should have a time for thinking about reason and cause after failure.

Hello [이름]! Great homework here! Thanks for sending this, even though it was a bit late. Remember to be consistent with your verb tenses next time. :) Please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ In our life, we have a failure not a few. >> In our life, we would have a few failures. We were depressed and flustrated in that time. >> We would be depressed  and frustrated at that time. I could depressed during a few days, too. >> I was also depressed during those days. However, I know that I have to overcome them and rise up again. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, I knew that I had to overcome them and get back on my feet. - betterSo, We should have a time for thinking about reason and cause after failure. >> So we should take some time to think about the reason for our failures.