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2015-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I want to play a skydiving from a helicopter. One year ago, I enjoyed a paragliding in the turkey. It was amazing and beautiful experience for me. I could fly in the sky and I could see the beach and mountain in the upper side. The paragliding not had rapid velocity, so I didn't afraid it. However, skydiving is so fast, and It will be start at the high altitude. So, I'm afraid it. I've been never bungee jumping. Maybe I will never play a skydiving, but I wonder that a little bit.

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Hello [이름]! Wow! You\'ve gone paragliding before? And in Turkey??? That\'s incredible! I\'ve always wanted to try paragliding or parasailing! I\'m not sure about skydiving, though. I feel like I\'m going to faint just by thinking about it. Haha! You should give it a try with your fiance! :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I want to play a skydiving from a helicopter. >> I want to try skydiving from a helicopter. One year ago, I enjoyed a paragliding in the turkey. >> One year ago, I enjoyed paragliding in Turkey.It was an amazing and beautiful experience for me. >> CORRECT! I could fly in the sky and I could see the beach and mountain in the upper side. >> I could fly in the sky and I had a view of the beach and the mountain from the top. The paragliding not had rapid velocity, so I didn\'t afraid it. >> Paragliding did not involve high velocity so I wasn\'t afraid of it.However, skydiving is so fast, and It will be start at the high altitude. >> However, skydiving is so fast and it will start at a high altitude. So, I\'m afraid it. >> So I\'m afraid of doing it.I\'ve been never bungee jumping. >> I\'ve never gone bungee jumping.Maybe I will never play a skydiving, but I wonder that a little bit. >> Maybe I will never go skydiving, but I\'m wondering a little bit about that.    

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