[[이름]'s homework]
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If I should only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetable.
There are many kind of vegetable in the world.
Sometimes we can cook the vegetable with the meat flavor.
I had a meat made by beans.
However, I know already the flavor of pasta, fried chicken, etc.
So, If I should only eat on type of food, it seems to sad so much.
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Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. My answer for this would be pizza. Pizza all the way. Haha! Veggie meat sounds good, though. I\'ve tried it before and I really enjoyed it.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
If I should only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetable.
>> If I could only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetables.
There are many kind of vegetable in the world.
>> There are many kinds of vegetables in the world.Sometimes we can cook the vegetable with the meat flavor.
>> Sometimes we can cook \'vegetable meat\'.
I had a meat made by beans.
>> I have tried meat made with beans.However, I know already the flavor of pasta, fried chicken, etc.
>> However, I already know the taste of pasta, fried chicken, etc.So, If I should only eat on type of food, it seems to sad so much.
>> So if I could only eat one type of food forever, it would make me feel sad.
OR >> So I think it would be sad to eat just one type of food forever.
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