[[이름]'s homework]

2015-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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If I should only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetable. There are many kind of vegetable in the world. Sometimes we can cook the vegetable with the meat flavor. I had a meat made by beans. However, I know already the flavor of pasta, fried chicken, etc. So, If I should only eat on type of food, it seems to sad so much.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. My answer for this would be pizza. Pizza all the way. Haha! Veggie meat sounds good, though. I\'ve tried it before and I really enjoyed it. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ If I should only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetable. >> If I could only eat one type of food for a long time, I want to eat vegetables. There are many kind of vegetable in the world. >> There are many kinds of vegetables in the world.Sometimes we can cook the vegetable with the meat flavor. >> Sometimes we can cook \'vegetable meat\'. I had a meat made by beans. >> I have tried meat made with beans.However, I know already the flavor of pasta, fried chicken, etc. >> However, I already know the taste of pasta, fried chicken, etc.So, If I should only eat on type of food, it seems to sad so much. >> So if I could only eat one type of food forever, it would make me feel sad. OR >> So I think it would be sad to eat just one type of food forever.  

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