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Yesterday,our phone which I am phoned by teacher is not working. Of course I could phoned at last, but there were no time to speak. And today,it didn't working again. When teacher try to call me, phone were ringing but I can't hear her's voice. Phone's ring was ringing many time, and I could speak again. What happened to the phone?

Hello [이름]!Thank you for sending this composition. It explains well what happened to your phone. I tried to call you several times but your phone just kept ringing. I even used our back-up phone to call you and I had several call attempts before I finally got to talk to you. I hope this won't happen again. Anyway, I informed my manager about this and our Korean manager might call you to discuss this matter. I'll call you on Monday, [이름]. Take care and have a happy weekend! T. Jane Yesterday,our phone which I am phoned by teacher is not working.>> Yesterday, the phone which I use for my phone English class was not working.Of course I could phoned at last, but there were no time to speak.>> We still had a class, though there was not much time left.And today,it didn't working again.>> And today, it isn't working again.When teacher try to call me, phone were ringing but I can't hear her's voice.>> When my teacher tried to call me, I couldn't hear her voice.Phone's ring was ringing many time, and I could speak again.>> The phone kept ringing, then I was able to have a class.What happened to the phone?>> correct