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2015-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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would you mind if the teacher, that's it for class today? bacause, I studied up to lesson 11. I'm going to trip the Philippines with my family this autumn. Can you recommend me any place to visit in the Philippines?

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear student!^^


Wow, I didn\'t know that you\'re actually planning to visit the

Philippines soon. Well, there are many beautiful, must-see

places here in the Philippines like white-sand beaches, rich

coral reefs, a perfect cone volcano, and rice terraces.

You might want to check this website for more information:

http://www.touropia.com/tourist-attractions-in-the-philippines/


Teacher Sarah


would you mind if the teacher, that\'s it for class today?
bacause, I studied up to lesson 11.

>> Teacher, would you mind if that\'s it for our class today because

I studied up to lesson 11 only?

 I\'m going to trip the Philippines with my family this autumn.
Can you recommend me any place to visit in the Philippines?

>> I\'m going for a trip to the Philippines with my family this autumn.

Can you recommend some places to visit in the Philippines?

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