제목how old should a child bel before they are allowed to use the internet?
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Im not sure about that. According to some psychologist, the children under 2 years old should avoid to contact the internet. And children between 2 to 5 yeays old could be allowed to use internet for 1 hour a day and they would recommend to watch the educational contents. Over 6 years old, they can access internet freely, but must do under parental supervision.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name][이름]! It\'s inevitable at this day and age. However, I also believe that children\'s screen time should be closely supervised and limited.
-T. Sonny
Im not sure about that.
>>I’m uncertain about that.
According to some psychologist, the children under 2 years old should avoid to contact the internet.
>>According to some psychologists, children under 2 years old should avoid contact with the internet.
And children between 2 to 5 yeays old could be allowed to use internet for 1 hour a day and they would recommend to watch the educational contents.
>>Also, children between 2 to 5 years old could be allowed to use the internet for 1 hour a day and they would recommend watching videos with educational content.
Over 6 years old, they can access internet freely, but must do under parental supervision.
>>Over 6 years old, they can access the internet freely, but must do so under parental supervision.
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